soft little tears

there is a tear
from so much use
i still see the rip,
raw
white and naked it
lays there
buried with a sea of
warm blue all around
i still see the rip,
exposing the edges of my
panties...
beautiful
imperfection
the latest fashions have
been ripped
for
us
it must be excellent
to have not
"imperfections"
but perfect,
inumerable little flaws
because that's what
they want
to
see

2 comments:

Charlie said...

i like! actually i love the way you manipulate the words and talk about colors and create images in this poem. i feel like you're a true poet at heart. i try to write beautiful like that but i know i'm a musician at heart. you have a natural knack for writing poetry. but it's really all in the same, we're both artists.

sweet sweet heartkiller said...

yeah i love music too, and i think if i get better at drums it'll become a passion, but i haven't had to try very hard with writing and i love it... so i spose i am a poet at heart