when did my ardor
surprise you?
did it leap forth in the
calm
of the night
or spindle its way into
your mind
your useless head
cracked like an open seam
in my eyes
only the shattered remnants
of love remain
you are my cold Michelangelo
looking up
while I stare mercilessly down
on you
2 comments:
i can't think how to say how that makes me feel. i like it though. i started reading the Eli story but it was too long so i gave up. if something is that long i'd rather read it in print. do you have anything published i could get my hands on?
i just noticed these comments
:)
it's awesome you read my old stuff i had no idea you did
yeah the eli story is long as fuck. i just wanted a friend to read it and i didn't feel like sending it over email i guess so that's what i did :p
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